Mark,
You have obviously put a lot of thought into this, but prior threads here have made me apprehensive about running extra wires down the length of the chassis, getting stray fields from the power supply at each pass. In your case, you have wiring going from the rear inputs to the cinemags up front (per Jim's advice), from the cinemags to the gain switch in the rear and back to the cinemags, then again from the cinemags to a loading switch in the rear, and finally, back to the cinemags.
That's five passes. Per Cinemag.
And I'm concerned about the power supply to the motorized volume pot I'm going to put in my Clarinet!
I think we all feel sick when a fellow DIYer's having having hum or instability problems with their build, especially when it's a Hagerman design. And as educational a hobby it can be when you're forced to troubleshoot, I think it's even better to not have to troubleshoot at all.
Best,
Brinkman